Pitch

For my pitch I will be submitting a full mock-up of the January page in order to give a total representation of what I'm trying to do, I will then use that feedback to inform the design of the other pages. Below is what I presented to the class as my current working version:

The 2 points raised by my everyone were that the design should also be printed on the back and that the picture of the final model should be more prominent. Another addition would be a line-up of the whole year in models presented on the front cover. The only point I won't act upon will be the model photo being larger, this is because I will start off the instructions with a clear view of what the final model will look.

Overall I feel that the pitch went well and validated my choices, assuring me that I'm on the right track.