Post Crit Changes

After the crit I received advice and opinions on my animations so far. For my video showing the app in use, no improvements were suggested so it remained the same. My promo however was view in a much more critical way and all changes suggested were acted on by me.

The first change I made was to include an App store icon to make make it obvious I was promoting an app, this was an oversight by me and should have been included pre-crit. The stroke outlining the words that scroll through was also removed so that the final company logo and tagline stood out more clearly. The final change was a simple spelling mistake in the word 'Shepherd', something I didn't notice until submission day and wasn't picked up by anyone during the crit.

Here is how my promo looked once these changes were applied: