Crit Feedback

After presenting my animation the rest of the class and my tutor Andrew the following points were raised and recorded in my sketchbook during the presentation:

• Plain background works well.
• First 2 parts of the voice-over fight with the music (perhaps duck the bass out in the music in time with the voice)?
• Cactus moves too fast when hit by the chair and falls too late, should fall from the end of the carpet.
• Globe should pass in front of the rails it rolls down.
• Movement of the picture swinging at the end looks unrealistic.

I will try all of these suggestions out in After Effects and evaluate which ones add to the animations and which ones detract from it. Sadly there is no time to present my changes to the class so I will have to rely on my own judgement when deciding whether to change certain elements.